The Commencement

I kind of drifted into my perfect world with this one but I like this one myself.  I think the way you approach a women says a lot about a man for a first impression in a woman's eyes.  Watching this classic *Just Friends* by one of my favorite male singers (Musiq Soulchild) made me want to write this.  I'm thinking about making this a series so stay tuned..... enjoy!

Excuse me!  I seen you from a far….couldn’t help but notice the way you walk and how beautiful you are.  Can I have a minute of your time to tell you how fine you are?  I know I’m a stranger you just met and this seems bizarre. 

I can tell that you like the finer things and I do too….this is why I choose you.  From the beauty of the snow capped mountains to the blue that reflects off the sea…..Just your simplicity does it for me.

I would like to show you a night out on the town…..from the count of those bags in your hand a little retail therapy…. I can tell that man you have turns your smile to a frown.

Motivated by the fragrance of your perfume….i slowly read into to you….

Let’s stroll to the nearest café and talk about you because I’m so interested in you……where do we begin?  I don’t want to get to personal on the first day….so let’s lighten up the mood over two lattes….one sugar….and a nice day.

 I got you comfortable and a clear mind now it’s time to find out what kind of damage the world  has done inside….I get there will be a mountain I’ll have to climb and a valley that’s low…getting to know you is half the battle but for now let’s take it slow.

She diggin me I can tell….. how she never checks the clock or even checks her cell.  She’s talking about how about how he’s not emotionally in tune and she is getting pushed away…how other dudes be checking for her but she tries to stay faithful but I guess this was my lucky day.

 After hours of conversation it’s getting late and by the conversation we have she has much more to say…..It’s only us and the manager is bugging us to leave so she can close this damn café.  With time not on our side today I can see the disappointment in her face.

  Her phone rings and its him…. she realizes the time… grabs her bags….smiles and says I hope to see you again…I reply I hope to see you too and just dial that number I left you… whenever you pledge sigma…she looked at me confused…. I replied with a smile……. whenever he makes you feel blue.